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Game looks really fun! A few typos:
Page 6 - "you are note their" no E in not
Page 6 - "dollhouse- and" hyphen should be comma
Page 6 - "available- and" remove hyphen
Page 8 - "department, and" remove comma
Page 8 - "from, Operations" colon rather than comma would be better
Page 9 - "HP- eager to collect" collect what?
Page 9 - "disciplines;" colon rather than semicolon.
Ran out of time to look for more this morning. Holler if this was helpful and want more.
Dangit. Thanks for catching those!
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Game looks really fun! A few typos:
Page 6 - "you are note their" no E in not
Page 6 - "dollhouse- and" hyphen should be comma
Page 6 - "available- and" remove hyphen
Page 8 - "department, and" remove comma
Page 8 - "from, Operations" colon rather than comma would be better
Page 9 - "HP- eager to collect" collect what?
Page 9 - "disciplines;" colon rather than semicolon.
Ran out of time to look for more this morning. Holler if this was helpful and want more.
Dangit. Thanks for catching those!